Posts : 74 Join date : 2007-09-24 Age : 30 Location : Florida
Subject: My tears Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:03 pm
My tears are lost .. i used them all .. i ran out.. help me find them cuz you made them all go away i dont want them but there all i got there the only ones that wants to stay with me and always be with me
herdarkerside
Posts : 40 Join date : 2007-09-25
Subject: Re: My tears Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:16 am
aww...deep.. its short...but..the best one u have ever written so far.. that its sooo true..i can relate to it.. you get 2 stars for this one..
Sahara Admin
Posts : 74 Join date : 2007-09-24 Age : 30 Location : Florida
Subject: Re: My tears Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:39 am
Yeah i wrote that when i said only my tears care about me, and people thought i was crazy, so i just stop saying it and wrote it.
Gloomforever
Posts : 64 Join date : 2007-10-10 Age : 40 Location : somewhere in Poland :p
Subject: Re: My tears Thu Oct 11, 2007 2:10 pm
Wow... Deep and true... Pure gold by sadness you put in them all... You changed emotion into remarkable words... good job... my artist
Applejellie
Posts : 78 Join date : 2007-09-26 Age : 34 Location : California
Subject: Re: My tears Thu Oct 11, 2007 7:39 pm
you and herdarkerside are SOO much alike.... it's a good little poem though!!!
Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:03 pm
