i feel the pulse underneath his skin.
through his heart my love sails in.
and i feel the love he has for me when he holds me.
and i feel his kiss.....
it can't get better than this,i whisper.
and he sighs....
eventually i know i have to let go.
but for this one moment i won't.
and never will i even dare try.
for my love can last a lifetime.
but love me,if only for this one night.
love me,and love me all your life.
sags and gray and wheelchairs,
bring it all on.
it's all worth it if i know the last promise you made isn't gone.
so love me.
love me completely,love me unconditonally,love me passionately.....
and love me eternally.
for always.
and for beyond.
past the dying days.
until the dust from our bones is blown away and gone.[i]
Thu Sep 27, 2007 2:37 am
... Ummm... lets say it has all that is needed... well worded... construction is well done from the start till its end... You keep reader engaged... and so... Its... perfect... its all 