Burning Away

This is my attempt to sound emo..


Burning Away
The matches were within my reach
Easy access which was taunting me to have some fun
The emptiness of my boring life made me want to
Just craving a little excitement to spice up my life
Playing with the fire
Knowing I’ll just get burned
But I just had to give it a shot
And take the chance
Little did I know just dangerous it would be
Watching while the flames
Slowly burned away the only happiness I had left
Crushing my hopes and dreams

omg..i looove it..
every word..good!!amazing ..
how can u write this stuff without even feeling it..
ur just talented i guess..
u get a star for this one..

omg..
i love this poem ALOT.
i usually don't fall for un-rhyming poetry,
but i have to give all four thumbs up for this one.

it captures everything into a little poem.
it tells a story through a metaphor.
those are always best ones.
amazing mind there.

Applejellie wrote:

omg..
i love this poem ALOT.
i usually don't fall for un-rhyming poetry,
but i have to give all four thumbs up for this one.

it captures everything into a little poem.
it tells a story through a metaphor.
those are always best ones.
amazing mind there.

aww, thankss..i was trying to make it a metaphor..but i wasn't sure i made it sound that way well enough

Bravo your amazing

Very deep... and yeah... you rise it... Rhymes are nice decoration... but sometiems they are not so necessary... You prove it