Forgiveness I never meant to hurt you Yet you did the same to me I need you back in my life where you belong You are my other half and complete me So please forgive me, for both our sakes.
I don’t know what else to do to win you back I would do anything in the world for you though Take me back and you won’t regret it We could pretend this never happened For it’s only one annoying rock in the way of something great.
I don't really like this one, but..u guys can be the judge of that
herdarkerside
Posts : 40 Join date : 2007-09-25
Subject: Re: Forgiveness Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:15 pm
nice...loove it..
repentyourselfaway
Posts : 28 Join date : 2007-09-24
Subject: Re: Forgiveness Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:23 pm
coolbeans..or are u just saying that? hm...
herdarkerside
Posts : 40 Join date : 2007-09-25
Subject: Re: Forgiveness Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:32 pm
repentyourselfaway wrote:
coolbeans..or are u just saying that? hm...
omg..jeNNa..u kno i dont kiss anyones ass.. i meant what i said..n u kno i speak my mind.. if i didnt like it i wouldve not post anything bout it..i loove ur writing..idk..i guess when i read ur stuff its like..yeah..i have something in common with her..now lol..i kno im dumb...
repentyourselfaway
Posts : 28 Join date : 2007-09-24
Subject: Re: Forgiveness Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:34 pm
okay, now i feel better
[jasmin]
Posts : 8 Join date : 2007-09-24 Age : 34 Location : batangas city, philippines
Subject: Re: Forgiveness Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:17 am
i actually can relate to that... love it...
Gloomforever
Posts : 64 Join date : 2007-10-10 Age : 40 Location : somewhere in Poland :p
Subject: Re: Forgiveness Fri Oct 12, 2007 2:28 pm
It look nice... Form of poem is kept... Maybe the last one sentence... hmmm... I just reminded how often I have porblems with ending something... but still its great... specially when its real so other readers can relate to it
Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:13 pm
