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repentyourselfaway

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PostSubject: Never Let Go   Mon Sep 24, 2007 3:53 pm

Never Let Go
Donít let go when I need you the most
When my fears become a reality
And when what I loved the most is gone
I need you to be with me
And to protect me with your warmth and love

When I fall, you help me up
Donít let go from my life because youíre a necessity for me to live
Everything is scary and I canít go on and survive without you
Please be the one never to let go
And be with me forever

Conceal away my darkest thoughts
So that only happiness remains
Youíre the only one that is able to
So please just hold my hand
And never let go


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PostSubject: Re: Never Let Go   Tue Sep 25, 2007 7:10 am

Once again jenna, another creative accomplishment from you, lol i cnt spell, ok anyways, that was great, and im going to try not to be so random on this site but its so hard. <<< Messed up lol ill have to fix it if i can.
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PostSubject: Re: Never Let Go   Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:13 am

thankss..and wow, but u gotta be random, that's who u are! ur random girl..lol
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PostSubject: Re: Never Let Go   Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:55 pm

omgods...i loove it..
damn..chiCk..
ur awesome..
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PostSubject: Re: Never Let Go   Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:27 am

awww...its really really nice...
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PostSubject: Re: Never Let Go   Fri Oct 12, 2007 2:05 pm

Very warm... and earns extra points for making Sahara feel as EMO... Uh... I am so cruel tongue ... Kidding Very Happy ... Seriously... good job Very Happy ...Maybe a bit too long few sentences Smile ... but perfection demands experience... so I better (gaged) mhhhhmmmmm mhmhmhmhhhhh mh mhmhmhhhhm (free translation: be quiet and watch out or you will pay back on my poems) tongue Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Never Let Go   Wed Oct 17, 2007 9:18 am

OMG....
that made me cry..
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PostSubject: Re: Never Let Go   Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:21 am

i LOVED that poem.
i wish we could like,meet,and like,compare notes.....
that was probably one of the best ones i have read to my knowledge.
another great mind here.
except the part:everything is SCARY...
scary:means to me like it was the last resort of a word to describe fear.
it sounds childish,
but overall.............
here ya go! Like a Star @ heaven
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