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repentyourselfaway

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PostSubject: Escape   Mon Sep 24, 2007 1:46 pm

okayy..so i just wrote this poem cuz this site is way too empty lol

Escape
These four walls surround me
With no one else near
To comfort all these fears trembling inside
I want to be heard, but thereís no one to tell
No one to understand this pain within

My loneliness shields me from anymore troubles
Yet itís not helping to heal this emotional pain
Maybe getting away from everyone else would cure me
Itís too hard to deal with the world
I just want to escape


hope you like it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Escape   Tue Sep 25, 2007 7:09 am

Awww

I Loved that it was awesome, and nice excuse for writing, i thought you said you didnt write, oh, i akseed you if you write you said you didnt know or something i cant remember what you said.


Ok, so yeah that was just beautiful, your Creative.
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PostSubject: Re: Escape   Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:11 am

aw thanks, and when u asked me i was like idk, cuz it was so random and then i asked why..and u gave me the link to this site so i never really answered the question.
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PostSubject: Re: Escape   Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:33 pm

omg..i think we have a new "emo" in the house..lol
i looooved it..jeNNa..like really i did..
looved every piece...every thought...every word...
LOOOOVED IT..
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PostSubject: Re: Escape   Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:58 pm

ur so sweet jemima =]

oh and i am NOT emo..lol..well, there's a little bit of emo in everyone
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PostSubject: Re: Escape   Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:04 pm

haha..jenna..loove it..
"theres a little bit of emo in everyone"
that is sooo true..see im not any different from u..
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PostSubject: Re: Escape   Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:07 pm

yea u aren't, but i think u have just a little bit more emo in you than i do Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Escape   Fri Oct 12, 2007 2:39 pm

Wow... I feel like archeologist that found ancient jewellery... (well... not so ancient Razz )... I guess its first poem posted here... ummm... or not... but what matter the most... its great... and yes.. its written by EMO tongue ... Hmmm.... but since I am lol! then you must be totaly right that *there is a bit of EMO in everyone* Very Happy ... and i will keep to this version of events Very Happy
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