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Applejellie



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Join date : 2007-09-26
Age : 28
Location : California

PostSubject: "A New Beginning"   Sun Oct 28, 2007 3:52 am

"A New Beginning"

i walked along the beach
and stopped to look behind me
i contemplated the rush of the tide
to wash away the evidence and the footprints it hides
all that came up the shore was washed away
fresh for a new beginning
fresh for another sad face
and i stood there watching..

sitting under an apple tree
i collected a clump of grass
watching it as it sifted through my hands
wishing my life could be filtered like that for me
i watched above my head as a leaf fell from the tree
and i waited for it to move away,patiently...
letting it set sail away with the soft breeze

i walked to the park nearby and watched the children play
wondering what it's store for their future ahead
i replayed all my memories to myself and tried to forget
today,i thought,is the very day.
their laughter ignited my soul and i wanted so much of it
the contagious happiness and the sweet innocence
i relished the scene with delicacy and silently walked away.
i remembered at that very moment i would be okay

knowing the days pass us in a blur
i hope someday i can retrace my steps
as an old woman once said
"you're only as old as you feel"
i tried to remember her face but it was only in a dream.
the old woman was me.
I love you
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Gloomforever



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Join date : 2007-10-10
Age : 34
Location : somewhere in Poland :p

PostSubject: Re: "A New Beginning"   Sun Oct 28, 2007 1:11 pm

Uh oh... I will never write so well like that Razz ... Its a poetical walk... shining all the time... Great job miss Very Happy ... I am on knees befor your skills Razz
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Applejellie



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PostSubject: Re: "A New Beginning"   Mon Oct 29, 2007 6:50 am

Gloomforever wrote:
Uh oh... I will never write so well like that Razz ... Its a poetical walk... shining all the time... Great job miss Very Happy ... I am on knees befor your skills Razz

awww!!
you CAN if you TRY.
omg.......it's my FIRST poem that isn't about love or sadness..
it's maybe one of my best i think..?
don't know.
but THANKS!!!
you really make my smile widen..!!
santa
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herdarkerside



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PostSubject: Re: "A New Beginning"   Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:20 am

nice.
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Gloomforever



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Location : somewhere in Poland :p

PostSubject: Re: "A New Beginning"   Mon Oct 29, 2007 2:51 pm

Desire... I am happy to hear i made you happy Very Happy ... but I cant even try... English is my second language and I know my strength Rolling Eyes ... I cant reach such level or so highly change my style... but thaks anyway for wishing it for me... I treat it like dream spoken for falling star from sky Wink

Jemima... My Princess queen ... Yeah show me a bit more words than just *nice*... or I will get out from monitor Wink... Yeah... ia mwondering what i should do to make you gigle... I guess I would have to do something really dorky scratch rendeer geek jocolor lol!
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