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Sahara
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PostSubject: My tears   Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:03 pm

My tears are lost .. i used them all ..
i ran out.. help me find them cuz you made them all go away
i dont want them but there all i got
there the only ones that wants to stay with me
and always be with me
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PostSubject: Re: My tears   Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:16 am

aww...deep..
its short...but..the best one u have ever written so far..
that its sooo true..i can relate to it..
you get 2 stars for this one.. Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven
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PostSubject: Re: My tears   Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:39 am

Yeah i wrote that when i said only my tears care about me, and people thought i was crazy, so i just stop saying it and wrote it.
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PostSubject: Re: My tears   Thu Oct 11, 2007 2:10 pm

Wow... Deep and true... Pure gold by sadness you put in them all... You changed emotion into remarkable words... good job... my artist Razz
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PostSubject: Re: My tears   Thu Oct 11, 2007 7:39 pm

you and herdarkerside are SOO much alike....
it's a good little poem though!!! I love you
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