Tell me,Tell me

tell me,tell me.
is it truly possible not to believe?
tell me,tell me.
you haven't forgotten about me.
i'll stand up straight and i'll look you in the eyes
i'll get in your sweet face and i'll ask why
how could you tell me you loved me and lie?
oh please...
please tell me,tell me....
am i the girl you dream of at night?
am i the girl you want to hold?
do you see me when you close your eyes....
you asked that i never give up on us
and yet....you were the one who said goodbye
so tell me,tell me...
when can i see
tell me when can i see the look in your eyes,
the look that told me you were always gonna be mine?
with a push and a shove no i won't stop there.
i will put up the biggest fight
i won't ever give up,i promised i never would
tell me tell me....
do you really think i'm fine and i'm doing good?
and do tell me..
have you forgotten what i meant to you completely?
tell me.

Tha's really good. It would be awesome if those were lyrics to go with music, it's like catchy and emotional, really nice i talk too much.

you really think so???
wow!
thankss....
yeah it was SUPPOSED to be a song,actually!!!
(maybe someday it will!)

awwww...
looove it...
it is catchy..you get a star for that one..

Hey.. its song for sure... and I bet it will be if some doubts ... its too good to be lost...

if some doubts???
what does that mean???
well!!!
anyway.....
i'm gonna change it a little so i can see if i can make it into a song.....
thanks for the acknowledgement though!!!
you guys are soo sweet for commenting on it......
i think it's one of my best..

... yeah... someone must have some doubts... cos it is posted in poetry... nothing big... nothing to worry... and yup... upgrade it... cos it has power... now make it shine

POWER!?!?!

SHINE!!!!????!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!??????


you're funny.
and really nice.
thankssss...............
haha.
maybe song will be better..?

Haha ... Yup... All is up to you ...

oh.....
well we'll see i hope.
LOL*

^^^ hmmm... this post had to be written fast ... hehe... not much life in it ... smiley dont work ... onyl few words ... only hoping ... girl ... how is your mood lately?

i'll tell you my mood.
thanks SO MUCH for asking.

well you know when you open presents during holidays,
you're hoping the one you open will be what you've always been waiting for?
when you open it,

eyes wide open in nevousness.
you're hoping SO much for what you wanted.
you open it,heart beating rapidly..
and...
it's NOT what you REALLY wanted,
but a VERY cheap version of it?
you don't know what to say,
because you're incredibly disappointed in the gift,
but you're grateful someone thought of you to get it?

that's what i feel.
i keep thinking of my ex.
i was PROMISED i would be satisfied with what i had been waiting for,
a chance at love for the first time.....
then,
it fell apart on me.
my hopes were shattered.
i was like...

Desire... better look for better version of him... He seems so faulty that is unable to upgrade ... Unless you have chance and know how ... Meanwhile lady ... wait for another present to come ... or think its your day everyday and look for it by yourself ... Wishing you fun and success... Yours ... my

oh.
he's completely hopeless.
I'M MOVING ON!!

yay!
so anyway.
write another poem,Bob!!
you write well..
and it seems you're the only person to reply on my stuff anymore.
i MAY stop writing altogether in here.......

MAY... I like this month ... Well... instead I have beautful and colourful Autumn now ... and... Desire... they dont have much time... and so crazy heart like me ... so... I think... you will come back... at least sometiems