Land of Hopeless Wishes

All Writer's and lover's of poetry, Hang out here.And meet other people Just as talented as them.
 
HomePortalFAQSearchRegisterMemberlistUsergroupsLog in

Share | 
 

 Cursed

Go down 
AuthorMessage
repentyourselfaway

avatar

Posts : 28
Join date : 2007-09-24

PostSubject: Cursed   Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:53 pm

Cursed

It seems every choice I make is the wrong one
Itís like Iím cursed with no way to break the trend
Everything bad happens to me
I just want one day where life doesnít give me hell
And things go according to plan
Just the way I imagine and hope they would

Why is the world out to get me?
I never did anything to deserve this
For once I would like luck to be on my side
But itís always running away from me
And going to everyone else just to laugh in my face
This unluckiness has got to end
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sahara
Admin
avatar

Posts : 74
Join date : 2007-09-24
Age : 24
Location : Florida

PostSubject: Re: Cursed   Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:59 pm

YAY! YOU GO JENNA YAY JENNA! lol
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.nomusicnolife.forumotion.com
herdarkerside



Posts : 40
Join date : 2007-09-25

PostSubject: Re: Cursed   Thu Sep 27, 2007 4:43 pm

aweosmeness...
but..i hate when everything i want goes wrong..
i totally can relate to ur poem
ur AWESOME!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Applejellie



Posts : 78
Join date : 2007-09-26
Age : 29
Location : California

PostSubject: Re: Cursed   Sat Sep 29, 2007 1:54 am

hmmm**
well we all feel that way often.
i do all the time.
like everytime i try hard to make something out of nothing,
it falls apart on me.
nothing goes the perfect way.
i blame Eve for eating the apple.
LOL*
BUT IT WAS COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY AWESOMENESS!!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Gloomforever



Posts : 64
Join date : 2007-10-10
Age : 34
Location : somewhere in Poland :p

PostSubject: Re: Cursed   Fri Oct 12, 2007 1:32 pm

Complaining is a funny inspiration... The reader of such poems can feel like shaked in hands of the writer... Really funny feeling...Its like... first verse... *shaking*... second verse... *shaking*... and so on... untill the reader... shaken with smile Razz ... reach its end... Great poem... Wishing you less reasons to complain :-p... or.. if you like it Very Happy lol!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Cursed   

Back to top Go down
 
Cursed
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Cursed hillman HS rules
» The Cursed Village of Ravenswick
» Cursed Hillman

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Land of Hopeless Wishes :: What's on your mind?? :: Poetry-
Jump to: