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Applejellie



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Join date : 2007-09-26
Age : 28
Location : California

PostSubject: Love Me   Thu Sep 27, 2007 2:37 am

i feel the pulse underneath his skin.
through his heart my love sails in.
and i feel the love he has for me when he holds me.
and i feel his kiss.....
it can't get better than this,i whisper.
and he sighs....
eventually i know i have to let go.
but for this one moment i won't.
and never will i even dare try.
for my love can last a lifetime.
but love me,if only for this one night.
love me,and love me all your life.
sags and gray and wheelchairs,
bring it all on.
it's all worth it if i know the last promise you made isn't gone.
so love me.
love me completely,love me unconditonally,love me passionately.....
and love me eternally.
for always.
and for beyond.
past the dying days.
until the dust from our bones is blown away and gone.[i]
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repentyourselfaway

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Join date : 2007-09-24

PostSubject: Re: Love Me   Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:47 pm

aw..sweet poem. u rock at rhyming..i suck at it lol
anyways, awesome job Smile
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herdarkerside



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PostSubject: Re: Love Me   Thu Sep 27, 2007 4:40 pm

OMG..i looove it..
i loove everything u write...
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Applejellie



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Age : 28
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PostSubject: Re: Love Me   Sat Sep 29, 2007 1:56 am

REALLY?
you guys liked it....
that makes me all warm inside.
i didn't even try on it.
but okay!
thanks for your replies on it!
much love.
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Gloomforever



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Join date : 2007-10-10
Age : 34
Location : somewhere in Poland :p

PostSubject: Re: Love Me   Fri Oct 12, 2007 1:09 pm

Ummm... Its perfect... but I cant touch any detail Embarassed ... Ummm... lets say it has all that is needed... well worded... construction is well done from the start till its end... You keep reader engaged... and so... Its... perfect... its all Very Happy
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